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 fatlucy
 注册:2005-6-30

发表于:2005-6-30 13:58:30
My college life

As a sophomore, I am feeling the time flies. Recalling about the past one year, so many thoughts are flooding in my mind. At this time, I just can’t tell my real idea. The memory is just like so fresh, and all the things happened yesterday!

When first day I came to University, I really feel that the school is very good, but at the first sight of the dormitory, something disappointing come up to me! The condition of the dormitory is really very poor with only one room, no lavatory! I saw something sad in my father’s eyes, maybe that time he thought of the poor condition! So with a big smile on my face, I told my father” it doesn’t matter, Dad. In this kind of condition, I will get myself better!” My father felt better. But when he was coming back, seeing his back, I just wanted to cry! I felt in this city I was just isolated, from that time, I said to myself, “ you have no others who can help you here, just depend on yourself”

And then I came to my dormitory 303. I considered that I would spend four years here (in fact I moved to another one year later) and my dorm mates are all there. Most of them came from Sichuan and they were chatting with a happy voice, but I can’t understand them! Again, I felt myself isolated! I hated that kind of feeling, and then I said to hello to them! To my surprise they are very friendly to me and warm-hearted! I no longer felt afraid. And I got along well with them. But at the first night here, I burst out to tears for that I was missing my family. I don’t know why. Everyday when I was at home, I was just eager to go to school, to experience the wonderful college life but when coming here, I am just eager to go back! It’s quite strange though, you must know this kind of feeling!

Just spending about 2 days here, we were on our way to military train. To us, it’s a fresh train and a kind of experience to know the life between the classmates. But to me, I was nervous but excited. This was my first and precious train life because before going to school I have been staying with my family. So, you know, it’s just this kind of feeling I can’t convey it clearly! The train life is impressive on everybody; we had a lot of activities, for example giving a speech on a stage or singing together or playing basketball. At that time, I felt myself so little among them. All of them have a special talent but not me. I admired them but meanwhile jealousy. Why don’t I have this kind of talent? Am I stupid? I always said to myself. So that time I was also very ambitious, just eager to catch up with them. Except the classmates, the trainer in our team also left a deep impression on me! He was not very handsome and very kind. Just because of his kindness results in my laughter when training. He always said to me that I should be serious in the team but I didn’t listen to him. So after a long time, when investigating the training result, I gave them a disappointing answer. The highest trainer sent me to clean the toilet, although, it didn’t means insulting to my dignity, but I was really sad about myself and my heart was hurt. That was a small thing but told me that I need to be serious to one thing. And unhappiness passed, the happy and funny time recalled me that folding the blanket. Yeah, it’s really very funny. Most of us had never folded the blanket and naturally we can’t accomplish the task well. When the monitor came, we pleased him to help us to fold the blanket. To our expect, we managed to persuade the monitor. After the monitor finished the task for me. I dared not to touch the blanket again and just used the clothes instead of the blanket. Of course, I felt very cold in deep night, so to my instinct, I crashed into my classmate’s blanket. And we were scratching the single blanket fiercely, just like a war. (Writing here I can’t help laughing out loudly).

So many interesting things in the train, I can’t list them all. Individually, I feel the train life is hell unforgotten. I think I will never forget it, cherish it as one bell in the sea.

Time virtually flies like a rocket; the train life was over in a flash. We came back with the good memory and deep friendship (there we knew each other well and became good friends). In our imagination, some of us burst out tears when leaving but not me (am I very cruel? Hehe). I know the whole new life is welcoming us to go back. What we can do is just putting the memory away.

As a girl, all the fresh things can attract their eyes. Yeah. This time curiosity can’t kill a cat. When coming back, the first thing we want to do is chatting. “Talking about all the things in high school.” From the talk, I know all the dorm mates are ambitious and they are eager to achieve their own goals. In fact, all the days are almost the same, we didn’t know if there were any fresh things in college life except making boyfriend (Just joking here, of course, we have never been so simply). Everyday, except chatting just chatting, maybe some study for the scholarship. And the term passed quickly. You must be strange “ isn’t there any contradiction among you and your dorm mates?” It’s true that we do have. But it won’t last several days. (Very happy, isn’t it?)

In the final examination, four of us got the scholarship (7 in all). To be honest, I should have been proud of them, but not, because I didn’t get it because of the bad train scores. In this aspect I am selfish. At the same time it’s a motivation for me to work hard. The atmosphere of studying in our dormitory is good, and we encourage each other! This is a very positive aspect. And negative one, maybe there is no. So I consider our dormitory perfect.

The next term, not very different with the first one, only one difference is that we work harder and harder and so many exams for us to prepare. We were always worried about the scores after taking the examination. Sometimes we can know our scores about some subjects very early, but if low, we are certainly disappointed. The life is not like the first one funny but duller.

Saying goodbye to the freshman, we become sophomores now. There are some feelings different. Mature a bit and puzzled with the future. In this term, let me see, we have several conferences about the job after graduating from the school. Yeah, although, it’s a little early about us to talk about this problem; we are facing so many problems. Maybe the influence of the graduates’ information is one of important factors. They are facing all kinds of pressures especially the job-finding pressure. So we are, and something other…

I can only think of these things. This is my college life not like the imagination of us, but it’s real. I have no other thoughts. The future is unforeseeable. Nobody can tell out what will happen in the future. Good or bad or other things? What we can do is to master now; today is our hope. There is a song can tell the truth well, which is “ grasp each minute in our life, try your best to let your dreams come true.”

                                         Some thoughts about college life as a sophomore

 fatlucy
 注册:2005-6-30

发表于:2005-6-30 13:59:39
If you have some ideas about this passage, please tell me. It's my honor to share it with you. Thank you  for your reading it.

 drama
 注册:2005-6-30

发表于:2005-7-1 18:22:21

 jason23
 注册:2005-6-29

发表于:2005-7-4 14:21:53
REALLY!i'm sure.please tell me how we will talk about it.i am waiting.

 阿朗
 注册:2005-7-7

发表于:2005-7-8 11:59:17
your writing is wonderful.
i have saved the article in my disk.

 lovelei
 注册:2005-7-9

发表于:2005-7-9 14:55:21
i have the same feeling with you>

 小孩
 注册:2005-6-30

发表于:2005-7-9 19:52:49
My  God !!!  I  Don't  know  what  do  you  write   ~~~because  i  am  a  new  ~~  i   only  15 years  old  !But  i  will  try  my  best

 口袋糖
 注册:2005-7-15

发表于:2005-7-15 23:36:34
最后一句话是什么意思啊?

 shuiyuan
 注册:2005-7-17

发表于:2005-7-17 15:14:19
IT ISAGOODSPEECH

 小黄机器人
 注册:2005-7-24

发表于:2005-7-24 10:02:58

 elaineliuy
 注册:2005-7-26

发表于:2005-7-26 11:35:24
I have just finished reading your composition,I am also a sophomore,and I also wrote a composition about that.Bolow are my advice to you:
    I think this kind of subject is a little bit outdated,describing the life in the college ,in the domitory.I hed read so many such kind of passage.There is nothing new which can really atract me!Until then read a artical which comes from a Chinese girl studying in Amrica!In her artical,she talks about the atmosphere of her college,something trivial but really funny and maeningful to us!I think that is really a great composition about the college life!the name of it is Stanford!

 望雪
 注册:2005-8-9

发表于:2005-8-22 1:20:30
You are great,your composition is really very good.i love it very much.shall we be friends.my QQ is 420707162

 martin^
 注册:2005-6-17

发表于:2005-8-29 17:26:18
hehe,it's really an good article! well done!
I graduated last year,your words remind me of my college time.You are a good student while I was a bad one,for I played computer games most of my college time.
You said that you feel puzzled with the future,I had the same feel then.Find some part-time jobs to gain more experience of the world outside shool,or you'll really be to green to face a job after graduation.And it helps a lot for finding and chosing a job in the future.Wish you well.

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我爱我家,英语俱乐部就是偶的家园,里面都是偶的兄弟姐妹

 48775134
 注册:2005-9-1

发表于:2005-9-1 19:26:19
Very nice!
Very goog!

It's my pleasure to read  essay  like this !!

 yayashow
 注册:2005-8-27

发表于:2005-9-2 17:43:22
Good!

 bluekite
 注册:2005-9-1

发表于:2005-9-3 15:41:55
wonderful!

 ihri
 注册:2005-9-17

发表于:2005-9-21 16:00:39
Your article is very good!

 sukey-小容
 注册:2005-9-21

发表于:2005-9-21 16:57:15
life is a game that we have to play,so let us enjoy it~ ~

 sukey-小容
 注册:2005-9-21

发表于:2005-9-21 17:03:31
Hello,my friends~ ~

It's my first time been here,and it really attracts me so much since I read ur words.

haha,;o),wish all of u good luck!

frankly, we all can enrich our daily life here,
boost our english and can share with each other's feelings and experience.

 sukey-小容
 注册:2005-9-21

发表于:2005-9-21 17:06:14
well,I nearly forgot to introduce myself.
It's sukey here.
My QQ is 364763758
   MSN is bassiona-123

 欲望的天空
 注册:2005-9-19

发表于:2005-9-28 11:18:58
All of them have a special talent but not me. 我认该句中but后不用not,but是指除了意思。除了我之外,他们每人都有特殊的技能。

 lqqin
 注册:2005-9-26

发表于:2005-10-3 15:46:55
I guaduated last year .Your words remind me of my college life that the days I can't forget .Now I am a English teather of a primary school in ShenZhen .Aithought I can't earn to much ,but I love my students ,and I am very happy every day.So I think you'll do the good job in your future, please belive in yourself .

 fengling
 注册:2005-10-3

发表于:2005-10-3 20:55:21
Oh!My 的 sky!!!
好难懂
I'm only tmelve years old.

 marcus
 注册:2005-10-5

发表于:2005-10-5 15:48:39
very good!i hope you all the best.

 marcus
 注册:2005-10-5

发表于:2005-10-5 15:50:52
very good,i hope you all the best in future.

 六度
 注册:2005-10-5

发表于:2005-10-5 17:08:11

 kammy
 注册:2005-10-7

发表于:2005-10-7 17:50:21
good boy  and good girl

 小虎才子
 注册:2005-10-11

发表于:2005-10-11 9:35:06
so good
excellent

 雨宝宝
 注册:2005-10-8

发表于:2005-10-12 16:58:09
many people praise you ,i have no words

 mekongsa
 注册:2005-10-13

发表于:2005-10-14 0:16:07
I deem that your article is very wonderful and beautiful ,I believe you can do better,and I will try my best!

 roselu
 注册:2005-10-31

发表于:2005-10-31 12:18:30
I think your article is quite good in general ,but most of the time ,you try to think in the Chinese way and then translate into English,and this is what we Chinese students always do .Keep doing ,we believe you will make progress.besides I am a sophomore too.

 幸福小悦悦
 注册:2005-11-4

发表于:2005-11-4 12:30:08
your words moved me deeply at this special time, my college life is going to be over next year, the only thing i am dong is to grasp any opportunity that may make my dream come true. i was puzzled at one time, i felt so compunctious, because i realized that the young days slipped between my fingers when i was at grass. my family lighten me again, my mother told me that "don't worry, let it go, i am proud of you forever, we're always on your side." now i know that no one can help me if i abandon myself. Every day, every hour, and every minute is special, the only thing we can do is just to cherish this moment!~

 zuolan
 注册:2005-11-4

发表于:2005-11-5 10:05:49
Exellent!

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左蓝

 angellee
 注册:2005-11-5

发表于:2005-11-5 16:00:45
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!

 apple1981
 注册:2005-11-16

发表于:2005-11-16 11:33:19
sharing the same experience with your college life!

 heguochang
 注册:2005-11-17

发表于:2005-11-17 18:45:06
太棒了,什么时候我有这水平我就很高兴了,教我怎么才能达到这种水平啊。谢了

 kathy87
 注册:2005-11-20

发表于:2005-11-20 15:47:31
I do not think so with you very much!^_^ I am a girl who like English very much especially oral English but I  am not very fond of  English test such as cet-4 .Though my major is not English but education technology ,I still wish to speak much more English just to meet my own interest.so boys and girls ,no matter where you are and no matter how old you are whatever your major is ,just stick to your love,learn to engjoy yourself in life when you are doing the things you like to .

 csj615
 注册:2005-11-20

发表于:2005-11-20 18:52:00
My English is poor,so I do not know all words of your composition.
but,I know the mean of your composition.
I have the same feeling of you .

 goldsmith
 注册:2005-11-23

发表于:2005-11-24 11:49:59
Your article is so good.
I graduated last year and now working in an European investment Company
My suggestion,try to learn more,when the chance come,catch it.

 04linda
 注册:2005-11-24

发表于:2005-11-24 21:26:11
I read your article carfully,It's really  a good one .I like it.Now I am a sophomore too.Partly I have the same feelings with you .I have done badlly in the past year.I wast most of my time,and puzzled for one time .What's more ,I failed in the final exam,and didn't get the scholarship,this is a big blow to me .Luckly,I've waken up,I know what I should do at present.Now I will make a good use of the present time .Let's make efforts for our dream.I am glad to share the feeelings with you.Waiting for you!

 yinin
 注册:2005-11-27

发表于:2005-11-30 21:13:31
en...a good one but not perfect..maybe it can be better with more abundant in words and sentences styles....

 yinin
 注册:2005-11-27

发表于:2005-11-30 21:13:46
en...a good one but not perfect..maybe it can be better with more abundant in words and sentences styles....

 月之吻
 注册:2005-12-5

发表于:2005-12-5 19:54:20
I think you english is very good

 海风拂面
 注册:2005-12-6

发表于:2005-12-6 15:41:10
I think you English is very well.I'm found of it but my oral is poor and be good at readding,who can tell me how to improve the oral grade?Look forward to get friends with youselves.MyQQ is531105227

 天使£小乖
 注册:2005-10-27

发表于:2005-12-7 18:17:32
自己写的吗??


还不错......

 wenwenlucy
 注册:2005-12-10

发表于:2005-12-10 21:13:11
I am sophomore,too.

 yani2002
 注册:2006-2-7

发表于:2006-2-12 10:47:07
very very good !!i like your article!!continuing effort !!"come on" a lovability girl~~~

 一纸沧浪
 注册:2006-2-14

发表于:2006-2-14 23:44:15
fantastic.i hope one day,i can also write composition like this

 kaer123456
 注册:2006-2-14

发表于:2006-2-15 0:05:36
good, it's too late, i have to sleep.hope happy, author.

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be true friends!and true heart! and true reality!

 jukawa
 注册:2006-2-19

发表于:2006-2-21 11:01:34
everyone have different feeling.

 好玩
 注册:2006-3-7

发表于:2006-3-10 11:30:59

 好玩
 注册:2006-3-7

发表于:2006-3-10 11:37:04
i enter the college just one term.here i love all the thing but i always

feel that i don not konw what i want.i see some of my classmates work hard

but i always play play and play

 joycetxy
 注册:2006-3-12

发表于:2006-3-12 19:47:12
in fact, I think u will succeed at last. Put on steam.

 南国少帅
 注册:2006-3-13

发表于:2006-3-13 16:30:07
违规或广告发言,被屏蔽

 fine
 注册:2006-2-27

发表于:2006-3-20 19:41:10
your composition is very good that the view comes from my heart.I want to i can write this wonderful composition.I am a freshman,I will be face to NET 4,but I really worry about wy english level,on the other hand ,i enjoy it.your college life that gives to me too much visionary.I should made me change a visionary that i can face to my career.thank you!

 keoisgod
 注册:2006-3-25

发表于:2006-3-25 21:12:24
Having read your article,i have the similar feeling as you.but there are a few faults in your article ,for example,in the sentence"Everyday when I was at home, I was just eager to go to school, to experience the wonderful college life but when coming here, I am just eager to go back! It’s quite strange though, you must know this kind of feeling!". i think these words"when coming here"is not  suitable.
 my QQ :32828194  i want get in touch with you.
my email keoisgod@gmail.com

 wzwloveyou
 注册:2006-3-26

发表于:2006-3-26 14:13:51
The pessage of the first floor is so good!! Now as a senior .i will greduate from my college.life in the college painfal or colorful? both of.  depend on your taste...come on .!! who like make friend with me .please add me in your QQ.122422783!1  wish all of you have a nice time everyday!!

 yhy2008
 注册:2006-3-27

发表于:2006-3-27 14:02:56
grasp each minute in our life, try your best to let your dreams come true
      I will graduate from my dear college .Frankly speaking ,your feeling is exceeding unfeigned.But as the former saying ,your translations are in Chinese english .Maybe we ,chinese students,all exist this problem.But i hope we ,who like english very much,all can make great progress.


    The love strength is great
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 晨雨初听
 注册:2006-3-28

发表于:2006-3-28 13:32:24
what you said is very good!I will graduate from my dear college,too!

 hearty
 注册:2006-4-7

发表于:2006-4-7 10:42:53

 dingxiang
 注册:2006-4-13

发表于:2006-4-13 21:01:15
I am a university student,i have been in the university two years!
my english is very poor!but lucky i can understand you mean!i have a same feeling!

 meizi
 注册:2006-4-18

发表于:2006-4-18 11:21:11
Good composition.I really admire your English and your courage.A ZA!

 ~[飘]~
 注册:2006-4-23

发表于:2006-4-23 17:54:20
  I cann't say anyting when I finish this reading and comments,
because they had said all what I want to say!!
but last I want to say :" Let's study English together,because we are all the English lover!!!"
   Come on! All the English lover!!
  That's all!!
 My qq is 373726245
(If you are English lover,please get touch with me! I waiting for you!!)

 yking
 注册:2006-4-27

发表于:2006-4-27 11:07:55
I am a freshman.
my english is very bad.so I hope that it is go to good.

 toulychen
 注册:2006-4-26

发表于:2006-4-29 10:11:27
Oh!My god.I have no time to see.

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Hei,everybody,hope we will be a friend.Remember me!A lovely girl,Touly Chen.

 linda_meng
 注册:2006-5-8

发表于:2006-5-8 11:40:23
Hello!everyone!
It's my first time to be here,my english name is linda.
My e_mail adress :linda419@126.com
I want to make friends with you ,if you have time,please connect with me by E-mail.Thank you!

 sai
 注册:2006-5-12

发表于:2006-5-12 21:39:52
It's so good,from the word i can speculate this must be come from a girl's hand.

 sai
 注册:2006-5-12

发表于:2006-5-12 21:45:05
Till I read the 7th paragraph,i ensure my speculation.

 maydy
 注册:2006-5-19

发表于:2006-5-19 14:00:22
Thoughtprovoking article,as a freshman,I need to establish my substantial foundation.Thank you very much for throwing me into thinking my own college life.I will come on !

 mapleleaf
 注册:2006-5-20

发表于:2006-5-20 13:39:04
it is a good composition,i believe you will have a wonderful future.

 寒冰
 注册:2006-5-26

发表于:2006-5-27 10:54:23
```It's coming```
haha  ```I'm  a  student  who is a  senior  3```and  this  is  my first  
also  i  like  this   composition
QQ;342653107````i'm  a easygoing  boy    if  you wang  ```please  add``me

 velica
 注册:2006-6-21

发表于:2006-6-21 10:32:03
Excellent ,but I think it has too much Chinese accent
Try to think in the English way

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Love life  Love you
May be I  can be the first
Believe in every one

 walker
 注册:2006-6-21

发表于:2006-6-26 20:37:13
Bump up!
the writting is worderful.
You are so great to write such a beautiful aricle as a sophomore!

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What A Wonderful Life I've Had,I Only Hope I Realized It Sooner!

 carmen.y
 注册:2006-6-28

发表于:2006-6-28 16:49:11
Good, Better, The Best...
It's a wonderful article. It's deeply recalling my memory.
I had graduated from university for two years, but I always remembered the lives when happened at that moment.

Fatlucy: Don't be afraid of your future, just do your utmost to overcome whatever you meet. GO,GO,GO,GO,GO...

 jessica2
 注册:2006-6-2

发表于:2006-6-28 20:01:12
Two years have slipped by,but I haven't achieve what I had expected,It seems I have dreamed away wy days,but,in fact it's not. Ijust want to achieve more,I'm an ambitious girl, I want to be outstanding in every aspect,of course it's impossible,after all ,I am a common girl.I have many dreams to realize,BUT they all ,seem so far away from me,I don't want to abandon them,so I always feel all at sea,I look strong from appearance,in fact,in my innermost,it's not.I feel depressed at the slightest things.Iask myself what should frequently,what I'd like to be, but I never found the answer,I don't want to be that any longr,I HAVE HAD enough, I may be mad,someday,if that go on,IT'S time I should think it over,and determine my goal, In fact I have changed a lot .The best's yet to come, ANyhow,I'll perserere. I'll try my best to make my college life colorful in the following 2 yeras. Nothing is impossible

 头好痛
 注册:2006-7-2

发表于:2006-7-2 13:00:39
very good!  A ZA A ZA FIGNTING

 bobbie
 注册:2006-6-28

发表于:2006-7-4 11:37:25
Cool! Continue to practise. When chances are coming, grab them! Good luck!

 lzk5529
 注册:2006-6-8

发表于:2006-7-7 9:06:45
wonderful!

 lzk5529
 注册:2006-6-8

发表于:2006-7-7 10:35:27
  Hellow ,Fatlucy, thank you for giving us the wonderful composition.and i am deeply moved after finish reading it .i've graduated for six years and i feel
everything is not so perfect as you wished. It remind me my college lives and i
miss it very much and miss my dorm mates and the things happened in each other.
  I have the similar feelings to you when arrived the school fist.In the second morning ,my father with a shoulder pole in his arm left me and crowded into a school-bus to the railway station for ticket,at the moment tears broke out in my eyes,i feel helplessly and my father was so poor. All the things  i could do was  to  work hard in my studies. i could not keep my heart calm after backing to dorm.
   Time flying as a rocket,four years passed ,my classmates went away for job and i saw them all off ,i was the last one to leave our school.i bless all of them find the sky belong to themselves and realize their dreams.
   I am serving in a state owned factor now ,i am get well with my colleagues but can't find the friendship in school.
   All of you are welcome and i want to make friends to improve my english.
                                                   myQQ :156528207

 侯彩萍
 注册:2006-7-3

发表于:2006-7-16 15:21:27
违规或广告发言,被屏蔽

 hongyan
 注册:2006-7-25

发表于:2006-7-26 9:53:51
wanderful!

 tracyzizi
 注册:2006-7-28

发表于:2006-7-28 16:02:10
The article is good ,also your english is good ,the last sentence"grasp each minute in our life, try your best to let your dreams come true",we will do our best to put in it,because god helps those who help themselves.where there is a will,there is a way.

 sunnyren
 注册:2006-8-25

发表于:2006-8-26 15:15:42
your writing is wonderful.
i have saved the article in my disk.

 muwao
 注册:2006-9-8

发表于:2006-9-8 14:29:14
I really don't know how far away we are!!!
after four years,if i can great as you,i will say:"thank god!~

 57130277
 注册:2006-9-20

发表于:2006-9-20 13:17:31
It is very nice,
I like it .
Do you tell me how to learn English well?
Thank you!

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I like English very much!
I want make a good friend with nice English
my MSN is wode1026@126.com

 lxy
 注册:2006-8-7

发表于:2006-9-20 15:32:28
yes college life is unforgottable

 kgyj
 注册:2006-6-1

发表于:2006-9-20 16:42:52
I am suprised that we have so many commons.Now I am a sophomore now,studying in sichuan province either.The sight that I came here with my father from my home often came into my mind.The sichuan language made me in trouble when I was new here.But I don't choose crying because I am a man .I don't have the right to cry.And now I had learned how to look after myself^^^^^^^
     Thanks for your article!
Bye

 zhizhi
 注册:2006-10-3

发表于:2006-10-3 20:35:39
i like colours
Your english is well,iam poor in listenging ,i am a fershman.can you help me write a passage -"on change"?thank you very much.only about 100 words.

 napos2006
 注册:2006-10-5

发表于:2006-10-6 19:54:08
very execllent article i think.You said you admire other's telent such as singing ,playing basketball and speech.Do you know some others also admire your proficient english especially as a sophomore.Best wishes to you.

 逆流的小鱼
 注册:2006-10-22

发表于:2006-10-22 12:49:08
your words are very attracted,but I didn't finish the hole composition reading why?not owing to the qualities of the article,just because of the experience is siamilar to me...I'm also a college student,I'sutding law,and I away home to studing  for the first time, too,your words have aroused my homesick already...hard as the way we will meet in the future,we will have a fanctic life,do you tink so?

 flora04
 注册:2006-10-19

发表于:2006-10-22 22:32:12
i very appreaciated the last sentence you say .so strang that  i have the same feeling when i read the front part of your passage.because i also have the same stituation when i came to college.now i am a senior,but i am still so not clear with my future,i was afraid.but just as you said “ grasp each minute in our life, try your best to let your dreams come true.”i will face my future bravelly.also,your english is so beautiful.i hope we can make friend .

 杰子
 注册:2006-11-13

发表于:2006-11-13 21:30:40
It is wonderful! I love it!   I am alse a sophomore . I am a English lover too!  Glad to become friends with everyone!

 小丑鱼
 注册:2006-11-18

发表于:2006-11-18 20:59:16
I have been to university for two months.But different of you our shool is beautiful and big.And the condition here is very good just as at home.But it is not the one that I had wanted to .So I am not happy these days.I miss my parents and my sisters also my brother.I often think that if I can go home,how wonderful it can be! But it is impossible.For a period of time past,I know a lot. Now I just make my best to adjust to the life here. And I should do my best in my study too. I know that it is you that to be adjust to the enviroment but not the enviroment to be adjust to you.

 care
 注册:2006-12-2

发表于:2006-12-2 22:47:45
hehe.it seems very interesting.

 xiaopy
 注册:2007-3-27

发表于:2007-3-27 23:08:01
your article is good.there more and more collage student ,and their life are similar.your college life are the same with me in some extent .Sometimes,i want to change my life ,but my school ,the environment around me ,cause me to delay the footstep of develop.You said college student should learn some konwlege and ability,so i will try my best to change

 baby唄唲
 注册:2007-3-31

发表于:2007-3-31 17:52:45
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no more words

 wuxingxing
 注册:2007-3-30

发表于:2007-4-2 23:02:52
我不知该说什么了,就是改了一下你的东东..还没改完...

 zal
 注册:2007-4-2

发表于:2007-4-2 23:21:28
you have done well,.

 liuge
 注册:2007-4-20

发表于:2007-4-20 8:55:34
from you write, i know sth,i am a college student,and i think the last sentence
is very good ,and i very like it."grasp each minute in our life, try your best to let your dreams come true.”

 yijiqi
 注册:2007-4-25

发表于:2007-4-25 9:14:31
I'm a sophomore too.When i got to my university ,i thought the campus is so bad .That fleeing made me so depression.Everyday wo felt longly and unhappy!But when wo are older now,we kown life is not like what we think!We should cherish everyday of our life!That's enlough!  

 candy620
 注册:2007-3-1

发表于:2007-6-8 16:45:24
it is  very good !and i like your last words "grasp each minute in our life, try your best to let your dreams come true !i believe you will do better in the future !

 workforce
 注册:2007-7-25

发表于:2007-7-25 19:36:47
I am not  a student  ,want to take back the past time ! and now i must do my best to learn english  to  keep up  the  world

 lixuan03
 注册:2007-8-14

发表于:2007-8-14 11:39:05
I have to say ,your words are so wonderful.To campare with you,i also have so many work to do.Adoration!!!

 张靓翎
 注册:2007-10-28

发表于:2007-10-28 14:58:53

 womo
 注册:2007-11-4

发表于:2007-11-4 13:42:27
thankyou you glad to share the special college life with me !
i am a freshman
at the same time i As a sophomore!
i belive myselft i can grasp each minute in ourlife ,try my best to let my dream come true!
gradually mature bit !

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永远用想起,绝对不会忘记!

 xiaoling
 注册:2007-10-6

发表于:2007-11-4 19:07:55
College life is our pretty memory forever.At that time ,we left smile,sadness,and maybe crazy things,these things will be our lives's fortune.To share the pretty stories with friends is a good choice.

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知足常乐

 爱上风的鱼
 注册:2006-3-10

发表于:2007-11-5 13:35:54
05年的?也太强了
我是说人气

 alice_530
 注册:2007-10-19

发表于:2007-11-8 15:55:20
you are so great ,but it is too long to read for me !  may be i should pay more and more time to do that !thank you for you share !!!

 geling530
 注册:2008-1-16

发表于:2008-1-16 10:24:30
thank you !let me have enough courage to face english

 xiao123
 注册:2008-3-29

发表于:2008-3-29 14:40:24
My English is poor,but I try my best to understanser you,thank you!

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我行,我行行,我一定行

 bailina
 注册:2008-4-2

发表于:2008-4-2 20:57:40
How time flies, I know you write it two years ago.
but your story is performing every day  ,so many students
have same experiences like you ,including me .Best wishes!

  

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