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发表于:2006-1-21 13:27:45
Eyes by Serena
As we all know, eyes are of vital importance to human beings. Eyes to us are like water to fish. We cherish them not only because they are indispensable parts of our bodies but also because they are considered as the window of the souls.
Apart from our tongue, from my point of view, eyes are another kind of language we use to express ourselves. Through one’s eyes, we can read sorrow, happiness or encouragement and many other emotions. We have eye contacts. We keep our eyes open to the danger. A girl can make her eyes to her crush. When to sides make an agreement, they see eye to eye with each other. Eyes are always one of the fastest and most direct organs to get your thoughts unveiled.
Until now I still remember an unforgettable experience, which happened when I took part in a singing contest at the age of nine. It was the power of my mother’s eyes that encouraged me to go for it. I had showed great interest in singing before that. But I was too shy to sing in the public. So one day my mother took me to sign in the singing contest. With my mother’s company and encouragement, I was determined to meet that challenge. Standing on the stage, I suddenly found I become the focus of all the eyes. I got so nervous to even keep my eyes open. When it was my turn to be introduced to the audience and sing, I became even more nervous. I felt my legs were shaking and my memory seemed gone, as I couldn’t remember anything. Searching for help, I met my mother’s eyes which are sparkling with encouragement and strong power. It seemed that they were speaking to me, “ Come on! Baby! Take it easy. I’ll always be with you!” I read the message through her eyes and at that moment I regained my confidence and began to sing my song. I did my best. Maybe my performance wasn’t good enough in the judges’ eyes, but marvelous enough in my mother’s eyes, I was sure of that. When I came down from the stage, she came up to me, saying, “Great! I’m proud of you!” and gave me a big hug. At that time, I found her eyes filled with tears of joy. Sometimes, you see, just the encouraging eyes themselves can make a timid person daring.
Eyes are another means of communication which is very important and necessary in our lives. I can still recall the scene vividly when my father saw me off at the bus station. To me it was the most precious memory in my lifetime. That year I went to the college for the first time and it was also my first time to leave home. When the bus was about to leave, my father helped me put down the luggage and stood in front of me, not knowing what to say. Unlike my mother, who seemed to have endless reminding to make, from drinking more water, eating more food to wearing more clothes and so on. My father, kept silent, on the contrary, just stared at me, as if to say, “Take care….”Then the bus began to move. I waved to my dad suggesting he should go back home. But he still stood there, motionless. When the bus pulled out, I couldn’t help turning back, and to my great surprise, my Dad was still standing there, watching me. At that moment, I was moved deeply, tears running out of my eyes. I realized it was another way of communication; I knew it is not easy for a father to show his love to his child by words; I knew it was the best conversation that I had made to my father; I also knew it was the best way for my father to show his love to me, silent but touching. Sometimes, you see, only an eye contact can understand the unspoken mind.
Eyes are like a mirror from which you can see yourself clearly, thoroughly and objectively. Through one’s eyes, we know where our weaknesses and strengths lie, thus we can learn from others and enhance ourselves. So sometimes, you see, only an eye to make a dark day bright.
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我爱英语网【Www.52en.Com】 | sophiean 注册:2005-8-16 | 发表于:2006-1-23 17:42:48 Wow!!! An elaborate article!!! Dear Web Master. Is it written by yourself??? |
sophiean 注册:2005-8-16 | 发表于:2006-1-23 17:45:19 Sorry, it was writed by Serena. |
wangli_li 注册:2006-3-5 | 发表于:2006-3-9 17:37:15 This article is so good and vivid!
I admire this essay and its author. |
谁与争锋 注册:2006-3-10 | 发表于:2006-3-10 8:50:37 very good,it is simple and vivid.
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carrotluo 注册:2006-4-22 | 发表于:2006-7-31 15:18:22 It's very good!I'm moved! |
tracyping 注册:2006-8-15 | 发表于:2006-9-7 8:45:42 yes,I have once saw a movie.The actress screamed at the actor and indicated him to go away out of her sight. But the actor stood still, watching her eyes sadly, even didn't say anything.Then the actress cried and pushed him hardly.The man had to turn away,leaving his tender eye behind... |
lamonade 注册:2006-8-17 | 发表于:2006-10-21 14:15:07 Graet composition,It's vivid and moving,I love you ! |
levelwu 注册:2007-2-1 | 发表于:2007-2-1 19:35:36 good! |
cicihan 注册:2007-2-4 | 发表于:2007-2-4 17:39:28 I think this article is so beautiful! Good! Very good! |
polly_ye 注册:2007-4-3 | 发表于:2007-4-11 22:09:53 Very good! |
dancerlee 注册:2007-4-19 | 发表于:2007-4-23 6:41:58 Good work!
Eyes could be our way
of giving and
gaining things
without actual
actions.
But sometimes, eyes
could also be
a cause of
misunderstanding.
Could be a huge one! |
wbing 注册:2007-6-4 | 发表于:2007-6-5 10:24:46 翻译本段文章,不知翻的怎样?请大家不吝赐教:
众所周知,眼睛是人体最重要的部分之一,眼睛对我们来说犹如水对鱼的作用,之所以我们珍惜它不仅仅是因为它是我们身体中不可缺少的部分,更因为眼睛被认为是心灵的窗户。 撇开舌头不说,我认为眼睛是我们用来表达自己的另一种语言。我们用眼睛来交流,通过一个人的眼睛我们可以读出他的悲伤,幸福或鼓励和其他的感情信息,我们的眼睛一直面临着危险。A girl can make her eyes to her crush. When to sides make an agreement, they see eye to eye with each other。用眼睛我们可以最快最直接地得知你的想法!
至今我还记得那段难以忘怀的经历,那是我九岁的时候,参加一个歌唱比赛的时候。从妈妈的眼睛里我知道,妈妈鼓励我去参加。虽然在这之前,我对唱歌表现出了极大的兴趣。但我很害羞,不敢在公众场合下唱歌。因此妈妈要带我去参加唱歌比赛 。在妈妈的陪伴与鼓励下,我决定去挑战自己。站在舞台上,我发现所有的眼睛都在注视着我,我开始变的 紧张以致不敢张开嘴唱,当我被介绍给观众,并开始唱歌的时候,我更紧张.此时我感觉我的腿在发抖,脑子里一片空白,什么也不记得。我开始在人群里寻找帮助,我看到了妈妈的眼睛,她在鼓励我给我强大的力量,好象她在对我说:“加油!孩子!放松些,别紧张,我会一直和你在一起!”此时我又重拾信心,开始尽力唱歌。也许在评委的眼里我的表现不够好,但是我敢肯定在我妈妈看来:是如此惊人的好!当我走下台来的时候,妈妈来到我面前给我一个温暖的拥抱,对我说:“ 相当不错,我为你感到骄傲!”。那时我发现妈妈眼里充满了高兴的泪水。 你看,有时就是这样一个鼓励的眼神让一个胆小如鼠的人变的大胆起来。.
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wbing 注册:2007-6-4 | 发表于:2007-6-5 10:25:31 翻译本段文章,不知翻的怎样?请大家不吝赐教:
众所周知,眼睛是人体最重要的部分之一,眼睛对我们来说犹如水对鱼的作用,之所以我们珍惜它不仅仅是因为它是我们身体中不可缺少的部分,更因为眼睛被认为是心灵的窗户。 撇开舌头不说,我认为眼睛是我们用来表达自己的另一种语言。我们用眼睛来交流,通过一个人的眼睛我们可以读出他的悲伤,幸福或鼓励和其他的感情信息,我们的眼睛一直面临着危险。A girl can make her eyes to her crush. When to sides make an agreement, they see eye to eye with each other。用眼睛我们可以最快最直接地得知你的想法!
至今我还记得那段难以忘怀的经历,那是我九岁的时候,参加一个歌唱比赛的时候。从妈妈的眼睛里我知道,妈妈鼓励我去参加。虽然在这之前,我对唱歌表现出了极大的兴趣。但我很害羞,不敢在公众场合下唱歌。因此妈妈要带我去参加唱歌比赛 。在妈妈的陪伴与鼓励下,我决定去挑战自己。站在舞台上,我发现所有的眼睛都在注视着我,我开始变的 紧张以致不敢张开嘴唱,当我被介绍给观众,并开始唱歌的时候,我更紧张.此时我感觉我的腿在发抖,脑子里一片空白,什么也不记得。我开始在人群里寻找帮助,我看到了妈妈的眼睛,她在鼓励我给我强大的力量,好象她在对我说:“加油!孩子!放松些,别紧张,我会一直和你在一起!”此时我又重拾信心,开始尽力唱歌。也许在评委的眼里我的表现不够好,但是我敢肯定在我妈妈看来:是如此惊人的好!当我走下台来的时候,妈妈来到我面前给我一个温暖的拥抱,对我说:“ 相当不错,我为你感到骄傲!”。那时我发现妈妈眼里充满了高兴的泪水。 你看,有时就是这样一个鼓励的眼神让一个胆小如鼠的人变的大胆起来。. |
蓝星 注册:2007-6-15 | 发表于:2007-6-15 11:55:37 This words is so good that i was moved Eyes are the windowes of our emotion.
I like it.And Wbing:s translate is so great that it is like our english teacher:s.It"very good.  |
blademaste 注册:2007-7-4 | 发表于:2007-7-4 14:28:31 文章写的可以 不过 就是........ 有点中式英文的感觉 多看看一些老外写的文章 多注意结构 整体把握文章 感觉你的文章能写的更地道 比如 排比句可以让你的文章更有气势 虚拟的应用 以及复杂句的应用 承上启下的关联如何把握 感觉你是看太多中国人写的英文了 中国味挺浓的 呵呵 个人一点意见 如果我说的不对 当我没说 |
never 注册:2007-7-14 | 发表于:2007-7-14 7:25:12 It is so so.文章的内容还可以,只是中间有一些标点没有用正确。还有就是断句不怎么明显,因为这使得文章有些地方的意思不怎么明朗。不过从整体上看还是一遍不错的文章。你需要再接再厉,断续努力下去。希望你会写出一些很好的文字!It is so so. |
lisashi 注册:2006-6-30 
| 发表于:2007-7-14 9:34:45 deeply moved!
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stevedream 注册:2007-10-7 | 发表于:2007-10-7 22:45:07 上面这么多评论,我觉得blademaste点评最到位
作者继续努力,用简单的单词写出不简单的文章。 |
kellyyun 注册:2007-10-25 | 发表于:2007-10-25 9:23:56 good! |
weikenomo 注册:2007-11-21 | 发表于:2007-11-21 12:36:40
good!! |
nola0086 注册:2007-12-4 | 发表于:2007-12-7 12:38:44 passed |
judy-zjh 注册:2008-3-27 | 发表于:2008-3-27 15:01:11

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